I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Maia, thank you for sharing your report about New Zealand in the Olympics. I like how you have separated your ideas into paragraphs. You have used full stops consistently but I am wondering, what punctuation could you use at the end of your conclusion instead of a full stop?
Ahlan Maia, its your classmate Ruqayat. I really you and your groups report about New Zealand. It was very informative. I learnt some new things about NZ thanks to you. I also like the background. Good work! Keep it up!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Maia,
ReplyDeleteI really like your report about NZ,
What you can do better next time is to add some pictures.
I hope you have a great day Maia
Luisapeta
Kia ora Maia, thank you for sharing your report about New Zealand in the Olympics. I like how you have separated your ideas into paragraphs. You have used full stops consistently but I am wondering, what punctuation could you use at the end of your conclusion instead of a full stop?
ReplyDeleteAhlan Maia, its your classmate Ruqayat. I really you and your groups report about New Zealand. It was very informative. I learnt some new things about NZ thanks to you. I also like the background. Good work! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteYours Truly ~
Ruqayat