I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Maia this Jasmine and Neha. When I was watching your screen cast it was okay but next time can you say your screen cast clearly and nice and bravely loud but i really liked your screen cast i loved your emoji that yous put on the side of your thank you letter and i also liked you photos that you have used. Bye have a good day
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Hi Maia this Jasmine and Neha.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was watching your screen cast it was okay but next time can you say your screen cast clearly and nice and bravely loud but i really liked your screen cast i loved your emoji that yous put on the side of your thank you letter and i also liked you photos that you have used.
Bye have a good day
Thank you for commenting on my blog Jasmine
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