I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Maia I think your writing is really good. You have out did yourself. Maybe next time you could add some pictures of the person you write about. Keep working hard.
Hi Maia it is me Murray I really like your report it is long but really nice i know you put alot of work in it so you are probably really proud other then that have a lovely good day.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Maia,
ReplyDeleteI really like your report it is cool and fun to read.
I Hope you have a great day Maia
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Hello Maia
ReplyDeleteI think your writing is really good. You have out did yourself. Maybe next time you could add some pictures of the person you write about. Keep working hard.
Nice work, Maia you did good wooooo high 4 yay bye cya wewoooweewoo
ReplyDeleteHi Maia it is me Murray I really like your report it is long but really nice i know you put alot of work in it so you are probably really proud other then that have a lovely good day.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Maia on your report. I've learnt new facts about boxing!
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